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Thu, Oct. 12th, 2006, 01:17 pm

Spent lunchtime by a river,
sitting under an oak tree.
I got swooped by a magpie.
It was almost like being home again.

Thu, Oct. 12th, 2006 03:52 am (UTC)
plumparellels

beautiful entry :)

Thu, Oct. 12th, 2006 03:55 am (UTC)
madefromstars

thanks, it's a beautiful day. :-)

Thu, Oct. 12th, 2006 05:12 am (UTC)
lokicarbis

Somehow the almost but not quite haiku-ness of this is better than an actual haiku (with all those rules). Beautiful imagery.

Thu, Oct. 12th, 2006 05:22 am (UTC)
madefromstars

:-) it wasn't supposed to be a poem but it turned into one when i added line breaks.

Thu, Oct. 12th, 2006 10:03 am (UTC)
qaexl

Was she pretty?

-Q

Thu, Oct. 12th, 2006 11:46 pm (UTC)
madefromstars

:-) She was. As was the river and the old man oak.